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by sabie12
Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:49 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Ohhhhhhhh haha I thought you were talking to me. Sorry
by sabie12
Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:32 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Also I don't know how to put it in a .jpg file? I'm an idiot when it comes to that kind of stuff sometimes.
by sabie12
Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:29 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

For some background... I wrote it while I was in AP English so at the time we were talking a lot about the duality of human nature and the inherent evil in all men and themes such as that in literature. (Mary Shelley's Frankenstein) So that is where my poem stems from. Also, in a way I perceive it as how we all put on different faces when we are with different groups or in different settings. I talk differently here than I would with my co-workers or my clients for instance. Me at work is different than the me at home which is different than the me with my friends.
by sabie12
Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:57 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Vompatti wrote:
sabie12 wrote:Okay poem was sent. Hope you like it!

Humanity-
Filled with evil-
It hides behind its lies
A mask for Everyone

Good, Bad choices we make
Changing who we are
Every smile is Fake
Nothing is Real

Cruelty-Innocence
The line is hidden-
Right-Wrong
No difference

No one is exempt-
It lies within us all
No matter how bright the Day
Night will always fall
it'll be in the upcomng issue k

Who/what do you want me to put as the author? Some of us are too embarrassed to use their real name and resort to various pseudonyms instead.
Oh Right well you can just say Sabrina if that's okay?
by sabie12
Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:14 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Okay poem was sent. Hope you like it!

Humanity-
Filled with evil-
It hides behind its lies
A mask for Everyone

Good, Bad choices we make
Changing who we are
Every smile is Fake
Nothing is Real

Cruelty-Innocence
The line is hidden-
Right-Wrong
No difference

No one is exempt-
It lies within us all
No matter how bright the Day
Night will always fall
by sabie12
Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:02 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Alright sounds good. So is this an online thing only or is it a publication?
by sabie12
Thu Sep 25, 2014 2:29 pm
Forum: Creative Writing, Co-Op Writing, Poetry & More...
Topic: Nervous Horse
Replies: 88
Views: 4172

Re: Nervous Horse

Can I submit something? I have a poem I wrote that I really like. How do I submit it?

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