Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:13 pm
"I don't think i can do this, Martha"; her voice was so small, Martha almost did not hear her, although she was leaning over her sister.
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Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:18 pm
"You know there is another option..."
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:53 pm
Martha looked around, and saw no one.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:21 pm
There was a small whirr of some machine coming from the room next door. As Susan looked up a sinister blue light appeared under the doorway. She glanced at Martha nervously.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2013 8:11 pm
Just then, a Nurse in a starched uniform, hat & face walked over and said to Martha, "Time to leave now, your sister is in good hands".
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 5:02 pm
Martha turned to her sister, "Do or die time, stay or go?"
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:45 pm
Susan stood up, and as the tears in her eyes spilled over, she turned and started walking towards the door.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 4:05 pm
A tiny smile started in the corner of Martha's quivering mouth.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 7:52 pm
She took her sisters hand, and, turning around towards the startled, starched nurse, said, "See ya, Psychos!!" and reached for the doorknob.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:59 pm
Susan thought the sun's golden rays had never shone more beautifully than in that moment as she stood before the open door.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:18 pm
She was actually surprised by the hand that closed around her right wrist, less so by the one that gripped her left a second later.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2013 10:08 am
"Who wears a flower pinky ring?" she thought as the grip tightened around her wrist.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2013 10:29 am
She felt a mixture of shock, sadness and resignation swirl through her as the hands, her sisters hands, pulled her back from the door leading to the street, and towards the door leading to the sterile bowels of this place.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:24 am
She looked down to see who was helping her sister lead her away from the clinic; she saw for a moment, the sun's rays hit against the little girls ring and her shiny blond hair and then she was gone, "I think I'm having a daughter."
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:04 pm
"I am so confused" she shouted to no one in particular.
"Why are we going downstairs? I thought we were leaving! Where are you taking me?"
"Why are we going downstairs? I thought we were leaving! Where are you taking me?"
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 11:54 pm
The door slammed shut on her screams as her sister walked out the front door and into the sunshine.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:29 am
Martha turned abruptly and started pounding on the door, "let me in!!!"
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:06 pm
But nothing happened.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:07 am
She turned to her right and saw a basement window.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 12:16 am
There were bars on it; defeated, she slowly turned around.
(LOL, I think Kate likes Martha much more than i do ha ha ha)
(LOL, I think Kate likes Martha much more than i do ha ha ha)
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:36 am
With a renewed sense of conviction, she walked around the side of the building determined to find a way in to her sister.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:11 pm
Then she stopped, a smirk twisting her pretty face, that had until that moment been identical to her sisters; she had always had the hots for Susans boyfriend, Alphonso, and had wanted to see if she could pass as Susan with him.
(I can just see the outraged smile on kates face as she reads this, trying not to laugh, while simultaneously being annoyed~ this is fun
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(I can just see the outraged smile on kates face as she reads this, trying not to laugh, while simultaneously being annoyed~ this is fun
)Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:07 pm
It was such a shame that he died in that car accident this summer, she shook off the thought and went back to searching for her sister.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:00 pm
She walked around the building for several minutes, and seeing the bars on all the windows, realized her sister was better off in such a place, hailed a cab, got in, and went home.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:58 pm
When she arrived home social media had been working overtime. Before she took off her shoes there was a knock on the door it was Alphonso's twin brother Fred. And damn he reminded her of that summer not so long ago, when she was in to Lost and he reminded her of a certain character from that show---
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 11:29 am
Jack!
Re: Let's Writee a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:30 pm
She slammed the door in Freds face, even if he was good looking, his holier than thou attitude combined with the propensity for not really thinking about the consequences of his actions annoyed her too much
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 3:43 pm
She decided to formulate a plan to rescue her sister on her own, and she also decided that Fred's scumbag, hick, conman cousin, James, would have no part in it.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 5:03 pm
She found rope, flashlights, and her .357. She threw everything into her basket on her bicycle and went peddling off to the Walmart to buy some black ninja type clothing before heading back to that hell she left her sister in.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 5:42 pm
Walmart was packed!
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:17 pm
So she decided to get drunk with her friends and not worry about her sister; she was a crazy bitch anyhow.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:18 pm
She passed out and woke up confused on a crazy island.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:25 pm
Which does not go far towards explaining why her sister raised her 4 children, all of whom apparently did not think much of her, but DOES explain many other things.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:26 pm
The end.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:31 pm
Or was it?
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:47 pm
Dun dun dun
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:52 pm
Chapter 13
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:52 pm
~epilogue~
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:56 pm
Eventually, they all died.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:56 pm
Except the unborn fetus
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:59 pm
Who, with his mother dead, developed into a vampire.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:00 pm
The baby preferred not to be called he, since he was a girl.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:01 pm
Which then became the baby at the end of 2001 A Space Odyssey.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:02 pm
The baby was proud of that accomplishment.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:03 pm
The end.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:03 pm
Or was it?
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:04 pm
It was, except for Book Two.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:06 pm
In book two she killed the twilight Vampires
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:07 pm
BOOK TWO:
The last man on earth sat alone in a room, there was a knock on the door.
The last man on earth sat alone in a room, there was a knock on the door.
Re: Let's Write a Novel
Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:11 pm
A sparkly vampire stood there, preening in the doorway.