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by daisukenowaifuke
Mon Mar 17, 2025 4:49 am
Forum: Tin Pan Alley
Topic: Lyricists' Lounge
Replies: 35
Views: 11379

Re: Lyricists' Lounge

ToT I will try my best to write like me, then. But you are all too humble.

I always assumed poems and lyrics were the same, but from this thread, I have realized you have a rhythm to your lyrics which I don't have. I didn't notice that when I heard songs so far.

This is a poem I am proud of. But this is neither sing-able nor rap-able.

How is this real? How is this free?
All of this sweetness, just for me?

I had a nibble, I will come back for a bite.
Grab you and cling, really, really tight.

I am not far gone; I am not addicted.
I choose you every time: fully clear and committed.

Is this mist? Is this mirage?
If this ends tomorrow,
in my heart, this warmth shall last.

All these words, which you will never see.
Let's keep it that way; I talk about you to the trees.

Please give me your thoughts and opinions. How do I write lyrics?
by daisukenowaifuke
Sat Mar 15, 2025 3:12 am
Forum: Tin Pan Alley
Topic: Lyricists' Lounge
Replies: 35
Views: 11379

Re: Lyricists' Lounge

Teach me how to write like you.


I will provide a very humble contribution:
Spoiler: show
Bippity boppity boop.
Important part of a fruit.
What's the treasure, what is the loot.
Your heart's enough, that is my truth.
;-;

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