The Syndicate

Long Con wrote: ↑Fri Mar 21, 2025 10:25 am Yeah, we gotta start putting in Vocaroo vocals on these... I read it, but there are so many ways you could do the timing for it, and my rhythm for it feels clunky

daisukenowaifuke wrote: ↑Mon Mar 17, 2025 4:49 am ToT I will try my best to write like me, then. But you are all too humble.

I always assumed poems and lyrics were the same, but from this thread, I have realized you have a rhythm to your lyrics which I don't have. I didn't notice that when I heard songs so far.

This is a poem I am proud of. But this is neither sing-able nor rap-able.

How is this real? How is this free?
All of this sweetness, just for me?

I had a nibble, I will come back for a bite.
Grab you and cling, really, really tight.

I am not far gone; I am not addicted.
I choose you every time: fully clear and committed.

Is this mist? Is this mirage?
If this ends tomorrow,
in my heart, this warmth shall last.

All these words, which you will never see.
Let's keep it that way; I talk about you to the trees.

Please give me your thoughts and opinions. How do I write lyrics?

daisukenowaifuke wrote: ↑Sat Mar 15, 2025 3:12 am Teach me how to write like you.


I will provide a very humble contribution:

Spoiler: show

Bippity boppity boop.
Important part of a fruit.
What's the treasure, what is the loot.
Your heart's enough, that is my truth.

;-;

Long Con wrote: ↑Sun Mar 09, 2025 12:32 am CSI Unit's gonna up and leave the practice
'Cause this room is gonna look like I was stompin' ketchup packets
So go on and get yo jackets, nod and gesture backwards,
And exit stage left like you a bunch of wretched actors

I'm more hungover than Zack Galifianakis
But I can't get over hangin' with these talented rappers
They keep switchin' up the rhymin' with these challenging tactics
But my flow is like a diamond, sparklin' thousands of facets

So pass it, but always know my passion is implicit
Man it often gets redacted but it always gets me lifted
I'm gifted, and everybody knows that I'm a favourite
But my lawyer is insisting that I sign this affidavit

After David killed Goliath, he's regarded as a saviour
If you're acting like a giant you'll get smacked for bad behaviour
If the fact you're out of favour makes you stop and check your assets
Then step back and make way for this apocalyptic racket!





I like this one, but it is hard to have enough oxygen to keep up with the last two bars.

This one has a mildly special attribute in that "apocalyptic racket" is designed to swing back around and rhyme with "stompin' ketchup packets".

Long Con wrote: ↑Mon Mar 03, 2025 5:04 pm

falcon45ca wrote: ↑Mon Mar 03, 2025 3:02 pm

Long Con wrote: ↑Mon Mar 03, 2025 2:27 pm Siiiick, falcon! I'd love to hear it with a beat

I wrote music for it, it's a rock song. Got a rough recording w/ the band off a phone, I'll get somethin' better soon to share

That's wild, I didn't know you did that! What's your band called?

Long Con wrote: ↑Mon Mar 03, 2025 2:27 pm Siiiick, falcon! I'd love to hear it with a beat