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Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 7:10 pm
by Kate
------chapter 2-------

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:19 pm
by insertnamehere
John was vomiting in a bathroom when he got the news.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:46 am
by Kate
He could bare compose himself when he heard a BAND BANG BANG on the stall door.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:53 pm
by insertnamehere
"Hurry up, you're on stage in ten!"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 6:59 pm
by Kate
John had no idea how he was going to get through this.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:18 pm
by S~V~S
He had ten minutes so he closed his eyes, and thought of his special place, and it calmed him; it was a place of death, destruction and pain- John smiled.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:36 pm
by insertnamehere
He quickly applied his makeup, and went on stage.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:39 pm
by Kate
The crowd was larger than usual.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:42 pm
by insertnamehere
The announcer started "Please welcome, BLOODBLUDGËON!"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:36 pm
by S~V~S
John walked out onto the stage, stopped suddenly, and fell flat on his face in the middle of the stage, dead.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:23 pm
by insertnamehere
In his hand was an obituary of Joseph Prince, with words scrawled on top that read "They've Found Me"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:30 pm
by S~V~S
The drummer of BLOODBLUDGEON walked up to John, looked at him, looked at the paper in his hand, looked at John, looked at the paper, and said, "I have no clue what the fuck just happened?!?!?!"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:40 pm
by insertnamehere
--chapter three--

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:47 pm
by S~V~S
Peter, looking at his sobbing sister, angry brother and detached mother decided to take matters into his own hands.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 3:44 pm
by Kate
"Let me see the letter."

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:02 pm
by insertnamehere
He began to examine it.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:20 pm
by S~V~S
"Yeah", he said, that looks like his writing all right; I just don't know how this can be related to his death, but...." he trailed off in thought.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:55 pm
by insertnamehere
Outside, it began to rain moodily.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 9:11 pm
by Kate
"It doesn't mean anything," Martha snapped and snatched the letter away from a very surprised Peter.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:22 pm
by S~V~S
He rolled his eyes and backed away from her; perhaps Dants was right.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:49 am
by Kate
"It's really none of your concern, you didn't give a damn about him when he was alive, did you?"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:58 am
by insertnamehere
"Five years, no calls, no letters, nothing!"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:39 pm
by Kate
"Mom, we are the children, not you and dad, how dare you place the responsibility for contact on us?" Nadine managed to get out before bursting into tears.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 7:46 pm
by S~V~S
Her brothers both went to her side; Peter put his arm around her, and Dante put his hands on her shoulders as her head dropped to Peters shoulder.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:46 pm
by Kate
Martha came closer and put her hand on her daughter's shoulder.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:50 pm
by S~V~S
Everyone in the room froze for a split second, then Nadine raised her hand and put it over her Mothers hand and squeezed.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 9:55 am
by Kate
As Nadine's eyes met her mother's, Mom walked in the door.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:55 pm
by S~V~S
She was carrying a chainsaw, a machete, and looking very obviously drunk.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 5:16 pm
by Kate
"Mom, are you okay?" Cried Nadine.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 5:47 pm
by S~V~S
"Long day at the Arboretum", she said, "We had to chop down the oldest tree in the park, it had the fungus, we had a few toasts to the poor old oak"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 11:01 am
by Kate
"A few?" Snarked Martha.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 8:18 pm
by S~V~S
Mom looked at her and said, "Since when are YOU welcome in my home, you were never a mother to these children; I had a bad day and coming home to your snotty cracks doesn't help".

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 2:22 pm
by Kate
"Please, this isn't necessary." Martha said with her voice cracking.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 8:11 pm
by S~V~S
"So manipulative, just like you always were, crying at the drop of a hat when it suits you, just like our mother" Mom said, putting down her chainsaw & machete.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 1:31 pm
by Kate
"Mom, maybe we can cut her a little slack, today, of all days," Said Peter cautiously.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 8:49 pm
by S~V~S
Mom looked at him; she said, "Fine, i am going to take a shower, I want her gone when i get out", turned, and stomped out of the room.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 9:59 pm
by insertnamehere
All of a sudden, Dante walked in, "John's dead."

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 10:09 pm
by S~V~S
No one knew what to say, since just a few seconds before, Dante had been embracing Nadine; it shocked them t see him walking in when they thought he was already in the room.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 12:08 am
by insertnamehere
Dante collapsed in a chair, "My brother and my father in the same night."

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 10:06 am
by bea
"Well, John always did most identify with Dad. It makes sense that he would take up his identity. But who would want to kill the both of them?" Nadine tried to figure out.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:50 pm
by S~V~S
There were two loud, rapid fire thuds as both Mom & Martha fainted and hit the floor.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:34 pm
by Kate
"And then there were three," sighed peter.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:44 pm
by S~V~S
~~~~CHAPTER FOUR: 35 Years ago~~~~

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:26 pm
by Kate
"Hi, my name is Martha."

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:51 pm
by S~V~S
The woman who had opened the door at the Home for Unwed Mothers looked at her and said, "YOu don't look pregnant, why not let your friend here talk for herself?"

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 9:25 pm
by Kate
"She's scared."

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:05 pm
by S~V~S
Martha turned to her sister, stroked her hair and said, "It's OK Susan, she won't hurt you, I won;t let anyone hurt you".

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:49 pm
by Epignosis
The place reeked of sterility.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:19 am
by Kate
The cold white walls of the waiting hallway were anything but welcoming.

Re: Let's Write a Novel

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:08 pm
by Roxy
Someone was wearing far too much perfume Susan felt sick to her stomach as she sat in a hard cold plastic molded chair she spoke -